Anonymous

No. It makes no sense. There is bile, but your sentence can't use it.

Anonymous

Indeed you mean 'bile'. "Vile" is an adjective which describes a terrible action or person. But in modern times your idea of "bile up her throat" would feel old-fashioned.

Anonymous

You mean 'bile'. You can't say 'bile gathered up her throat' but you CAN say 'bile gathered IN her throat' or 'Bile rose up her throat'. 'Gathering up' is a transitive action. Crowds gather, but we gather UP items lying around on the floor.

Anonymous

Nobody would understand that. It doesn't make sense.

Anonymous

That would be BILE gathering up in her throat. as you have it, she swallowed a glass vial and is choking on it.

Anonymous

no BILE churned in her stomach

Anonymous

bile not vile

Anonymous

No. "Vile" isn't a noun, it's an adjective. You can't use it in that manner. "Bile" is often used to refer to great anger. It doesn't actually "gather in one's throat," but it may be described as doing so to refer to growing anger.

Anonymous

The word you're probably looking for is "bile", which is the bitter green stuff stored in the gallbladder and used as a metaphor for anger or irritability. "Vile" is always an adjective.

Anonymous

Doesn't make sense. Vile isn't something you can tangibly feel. It's not a noun, it's an adjective.