Is this grammar correct?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-05-25 19:43:00

Social Science

4 answers

Last sentence of my Hamlet paper for English. "However, at a grave cost, a cost at which he paid with the very substance that took the one whom requested avenge." Is "the one who requested avenge" right? Or should I simply say "the King"?

Anonymous

Yes
Anonymous

It must be "the one who took", not "the one whom took". The concepts swept up into your sentence are very complex, and would probably make sense only in the context of your whole article.
Anonymous

Hmmm, the verb tense conjugation of "avenge" is just a little awkward. Try instead, "....that took the one who requested to be avenged."
Anonymous

You thsk