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Am I using commas perfectly below, and should I use period or comma after 'watching it'?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-05-19 14:47:24

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Am I using commas perfectly below, and should I use period or comma after 'watching it'?

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I've watched this movie the most in my life so far, and I'll never ever will get tired of watching it, it's probably the greatest movie ever made in history.

  • Anonymous

    I've watched this movie the most in my life, so far, and I'll never ever get tired of watching it; it's probably the greatest movie ever made in history.

  • Anonymous

    Period after "watching it." And you should delete the word "will" before "get"; the word "I'll" already contains "will".

  • Anonymous

    The first one after "far" is OK but the second one should be removed, replaced with a period or a semi-colon.

  • Anonymous

    What you have is a run-on sentences; you're running two sentences together. Do it his way: I've watched this movie the most in my life so far, and I'll never ever will get tired of watching it. it's probably the greatest movie ever made in history.

  • Anonymous

    Maybe

  • Anonymous

    You need a period or semi-colon after "watching it" because you're connecting a new clause. "I'll never get tired of watching it"- you have an extra "will" in there, and "never ever" is too informal.

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