How does this sound, any suggestions?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-05-29 14:05:53

Social Science

3 answers

looking out over the vast emerald lake victor eyes a yummy sight of a naked woman.

Anonymous

... Victor sights a most delicious looking naked woman.
Anonymous

You need to learn how to write a properly constructed sentence. And why would a grown man, I am presuming that he is grown, refer to a naked woman as yummy?
Anonymous

Sounds a bit questionable. Maybe change the topic a bit?