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Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-06-13 22:10:10
Social Science
Do you see any grammatical error in my sentence? If so, can you fix it for me?
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"Johnand I met because our love for the Salsa dance brought us together" Does it make sense? Thank you!
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Anonymous
John and I met because of our mutual love for Salsa dancing.
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Anonymous
As a better way of expressing that idea try: "John and I met through our love of Salsa dancing". And I wrote that form without looking at the answer by Cara!
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Anonymous
"John and I met through our love of salsa dancing."
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Anonymous
Salsa need not be capitalized. I would change "the salsa dance" to "salsa dancing".
