I need help with rewriting this. I need the wow factor!?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-06-24 11:42:05

Social Science

5 answers

Any suggestions on how to rewrite the following phrase “I will engage in the success of my team and encourage them to fulfill their goals as well as the entire team.”

Anonymous

I will strive for the success of my team and encourage my members to fulfill our goal as well as their own.
Anonymous

As I partake in my team's success, I will encourage each member to fulfill their individual goals, as well as those of the entire team.
Anonymous

I'm an inspirational team leader who aims to get the very best out of everyone.
Anonymous

idk
Anonymous

I am a winner who builds a team of winners!