Please help writing question.?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-05-19 10:42:59

Social Science

6 answers

Does this sentence make sense and if not please can you help me improve it? (He was the embodiment of beauty that surpaced both male and female.)

Anonymous

"Surpassed" is the correct spelling.
Anonymous

I'd be happy to help you reword it, but I truly don't understand what you're trying to say.... and, do you mean "surpassed"?
Anonymous

This can be done a couple of ways; here is another that is correct and a bit more stylish: "He was the embodiment of a beauty that surpassed both male and female forms."
Anonymous

Yes, it makes sense, and reads as if you do have it just right.
Anonymous

He was the embodiment of beauty, surpassing both male and female ideals.
Anonymous

Start by spelling surpassed correctly.