Can some one help me with this, English wise.?

Education & Reference by Anonymous 2018-06-11 23:08:39

Social Science

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I am trying to write this in a correct manner and need some help... "Two other men rush her grabbing her by the arms dragging her from the scene while a third man puts a bag over head." any help in fixing it.

Anonymous

Two other men rush her, grabbing her by the arms, dragging her from the scene as a third man puts a bag over head.